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Post by Gold Chocobo on Mon Sep 27, 2010 4:03 pm

This should go to, there is not enough Tactics fan-fics on fan-fiction in general.

I have the first chappy done.

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Post by sailorstar165 on Mon Sep 27, 2010 4:07 pm

Have at it.

Just an FYI: people tend to like one longer chapter rather then three shorter chapters.

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Post by Gold Chocobo on Thu Sep 30, 2010 4:03 pm

First Chapter posted, which is about 7500 words. I think it'll suffice. It's a cute chapter :3

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Post by Guest on Tue Oct 05, 2010 10:04 pm

People do like long chapters.... when the author doesn't update all that often. But when you update regularly, they don't mind the shortness.

Yay Tactics.

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Post by sailorstar165 on Thu Oct 07, 2010 7:42 pm

Hey guys, big thing about the FF.net account for next time.

First chapter, say who played who specifically. Not just "These were the people involved."

Like...

Roy: Koru
Riza: Sailorstar165
and so on. Just say the Your Role account. No need fo a fanfic account listing.

And Gold? I think you need a little more practice formatting. Try taking aook at "The New 14th Noah" for examples of what to do. I know it's successful simply because of all the reveiws, and because I can reread it a long time after and still understand what's going on and not be confused by order.

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Post by Gold Chocobo on Fri Oct 08, 2010 7:20 pm

If you look at Target, the formatting is better then unshown, I might re-fix unshown.

Final chapter is posted.

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